前回の日本語訳
What were your dreams in the past? What are your dreams now?
どんな夢を持っていましたか。今の夢は何ですか
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As a child, I loved animals and I dreamed of being a veterinarian. However, when I was in junior high school, I had a bad experience in biology class. The teacher told us to make an insect collection. We had to find as many insects as we could, poison them in a jar, and display them in a box by sticking pins through them. I hated killing the insects and failed the assignment. After that, I didn't like studying science. So I didn't become a veterinarian, but I still love animals. In fact, animals are still an important part of my dreams today. I'm now writing a novel, for older children, and there are a variety of animal characters in the story. There's a dog, a bear, a porcupine, a lot of llamas, and many others. My goal is to get this novel published in the United States after I finish it. Maybe one day you can read it! (In English, of course!)
子どものころ、私は動物が大好きで、獣医師になることを夢見ていました。けれど、中学生の時、生物の授業で嫌な経験をしました。先生は私たちに昆虫採集をするように言いました。私たちはできる限り多くの昆虫を探し、それらを瓶の中で毒殺し、ピンで突き刺して箱の中に飾らなければいけませんでした。私は昆虫を殺すのが嫌で、課題で落第点を取りました。それ以後、私は科学を勉強するのが嫌いでした。だから、私は獣医師にはなりませんでした。ですが、私は今でも動物が大好きです。実は、動物はいまだに私の夢の重要な部分なのです。私は今、子ども向けの小説を書いています。そして、その物語にはいろいろな動物が出てきます。犬やクマ、ヤマアラシやラマなどたくさんいます。小説を書き終えたら、米国で出版するのが私の目標です。いつの日か、あなたも読むことができるかもしれません!(もちろん英語で!)
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ベックさんのコメント
Ms. Mackey : |
Thank you for your touching essay. I think your children are lucky to have you as their mother. I hope you enjoy many, many happy years together. As for your writing, you did a good job, but here’s one thing to keep in mind. When you use the expression “one of my...” or “one of the...”, it’s important to make the subject plural, such as “one of my dreams” or “one of the TV shows I like...”. Hello to your children!
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Ms. MURATA : |
Thanks for your essay! I’m sorry you weren’t able to realize your dream of becoming a guide dog trainer, but it sounds like Hana was a fun and lively friend when you were growing up! About your essay, here’s a more natural way to express this sentence: “My family had a Labrador retriever named Hana.” Keep writing!
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Ms. tambourine : |
I wish you all the best with your goals! It sounds to me like you have a lot of motivation and that will help you achieve your dreams. Good luck with your TOEFL class. The TOEFL test is challenging, I know, but you can do it. Study hard and read, read, read. Being a good reader is very important for the TOEFL test. One quick language point: Instead of “I feel a lot of fun,” it’s more natural to say “It’s a lot of fun!”
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Ms. vine eggs : |
I hope you’re enjoying your job at the library! I love libraries and books. In fact, I go to the children’s library about once a week to borrow books to read to my kids. I wish you luck, too, with your dream of using English more in the future. (Perhaps we’ll meet at the library one of these days?) Your essay, by the way, was well-written. Here’s one hint: “I dreamed of (verb)-ing...” For example: “I dreamed of owning a cake shop when I was a child” or “I dreamed of being the owner of a cake shop...”
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Mr. SOS男 : |
Best of luck with all your post-retirement dreams! It seems to me you’re making good progress with your goals for English. As usual, your essay was strong. This sentence, though, would sound more natural expressed this way: “When I was in high school, I dreamed of becoming a judge.” As I mentioned to another writer, use the set phrase “I dreamed of (verb)-ing...” Happy travels with your wife!
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