前回の日本語訳
Do you eat well? What could you do to have healthier eating habits?
食べていますか。今より健全な食生活のためにどんなことができると思いますか
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In general, I think I eat pretty well. There are two reasons why. First, because I live in Japan, I can eat a lot of healthy food every day like rice and fish. In America, there is so much junk food and it's more difficult to maintain healthy eating habits. If I still lived in America, I think I would be fatter now, like many Americans. And the second reason is because my wife is a good cook and she makes healthy meals for me and my children. If I had to cook - and I can't cook very well at all - I'm sure my meals would not be so healthy. I would probably eat pizza every day! At the same time, it's true that I could be more careful about snacks. I eat too many snacks, especially sweets like chocolate and ice cream. When you read this essay, I will probably be eating a big box of Valentine's Day chocolate!
概して、私はちゃんとした食事をしていると思います。それには二つの理由があります。一つは、日本に住んでいて、米や魚など健康的な物を毎日食べられるからです。米国は、高カロリーで低栄養な物が多く、健康的な食習慣を保つのは難しいのです。もしも今、米国に住んでいたら、多くの米国人と同じように、今より太っていたと思います。二つ目の理由は、妻が料理上手で、私と子どものために健康的な食事を作ってくれるからです。もしも私が料理をしないといけなくなったら(私は料理が苦手です)健康的なメニューにならないのは間違いないでしょう。毎日ピザになると思います!が、同時にお菓子を食べるのには、今より気を付けるようになるでしょう。チョコレートやアイスクリームなどの甘い物を中心にお菓子をいつも食べ過ぎているので…。皆さんにエッセーを読んでもらっているころには、私は沢山のバレンタインチョコレートを食べていることでしょう!
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ベックさんのコメント
Ms. vine eggs : |
I like oysters, but my wife is allergic to them so we never eat them at home. I can't complain much, though, because she's a good cook and she makes healthy meals for me and my children. She also tries to provide us with "foods in season"-I think that was the expression you were looking for in your essay. Also, when you talk about age, say "When I was in my 20s" or "She's in her 30s."
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Ms. Xiao : |
Thank you for your well-written essay. I completely understand. It’s hard for me to change my eating habits, too. But let’s keep trying! For the last sentence of your essay, I suggest something like this would be more natural: “For now, I would like to eat less junk food, and more healthy food.” I look forward to your next essay!
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Ms. bison : |
Thanks for writing again! I have a “sweet tooth,” too, so I understand how difficult it is to stop eating sweets! I’m determined, though, to do better. Good luck to you, too! As for your essay, here’s a suggestion: use the expressions “gain weight” and “lose weight.” For example: “Recently, I’ve gained weight.” or “He lost a lot of weight!” Keep writing! Keep improving!
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Ms. MURATA : |
It’s funny, when I lived at home with my mother, my eating habits were poor because my mother can’t cook! And they were even worse when I was living on my own! Fortunately, my wife is a good cook and she makes healthy meals for us. Otherwise, I think I would be very, very fat! About your essay, just a couple of suggestions: “In the past, I...”; “live at home”; “for a long time”
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